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Words: 301 |
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Published: Sep 14, 2018
Words: 301|Page: 1|2 min read
Published: Sep 14, 2018
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The short story Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare is about two people who fall in love despite their families' hatredThe author should rephrase the thesis statement to make it clearer. For example, "In Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare portrays the extreme effects of love and hate on individuals and society." Also, the author states that the story is a short story, which is incorrect. Romeo and Juliet is a play, not a short story. . The theme of the story is that love and hate can make people do extreme things. One example of extreme reaction to love is that Friar Laurence's plan could easily have failed. Juliet went to Friar Laurence to give her an idea so she didn’t have to marry paris or she would kill herself with a knife. “Juliet agreed to do as Friar Laurence suggested, so the Friar sent a messenger to Romeo to explain the plan and request his presence at the cryptThe author needs to provide more context for the quotes they use. They should introduce the quote and explain its significance. ” (164). The message to Romeo was delayed so he thinks his wife is dead and he rushes to the Capulet crypt to see her.
Another extreme reaction to love is Romeo and Juliet got married quicklyThe author should be more precise in their language. Romeo and Juliet did not get married quickly, they got married the same day they met. Here is a suggested revision: "Another extreme reaction to love in the play is Romeo and Juliet's hasty marriage. After meeting at the Capulet party, Romeo and Juliet decide to get married the same day at Friar Laurence's house." . Romeo and his friend went to the Capulet party so that Romeo would forget Rosaline. When Romeo saw juliet he said “I never saw true beauty till this nightThe quote is incorrectly cited. It is actually spoken by Romeo when he first sees Juliet, not at the party. ”(158). Romeo and Juliet fall in love even though their familes hate each other. When they see each other they make their decision to marry secretly in Friar Laurence’s house. The final extreme thing that happened is that Romeo and Juliet die. When Romeo got in the Capulet crypt “He pulled out a vial of poison that he had purchased on the wayThe author needs to provide more context for the quotes they use. They should introduce the quote and explain its significance. ”(165) and he was saying “Oh my love, my wife”(165). After 24 hours Juliet woke up and saw that Romeo was dead .“Juliet knelt next to Romeo, taking the knife that he kept sheathed at his waist”(166) and she stabbed herself by saying “There rust, and let me die”(166).
In conclusion, Romeo and Juliet make some decisions very quickly which can lead to very extreme things and sometimes love can lead people to die. In life, love is the most important because you can buy clothes or anything except loveThe author should restate their thesis and summarize their main points. They should avoid making broad, unsupported statements such as "love is the most important." .
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