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Words: 536 |
Page: 1|
3 min read
Published: Jan 4, 2019
Words: 536|Page: 1|3 min read
Published: Jan 4, 2019
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Even though it was forbidden, Antigone decided to defy the state’s law and give her brother a burialThe opening sentence could be rephrased to make it more engaging.
Many people claim that they would do anything for their family, but Antigone showed that she truly feels the need to honor her family. She broke the law to bury her brother. Antigone takes her sister into a room and tells her “What hath not Creon destined our brother the one to buried to shame” (Sophocles,11). Antigone is telling Ismene about the death of their brothers. Antigone say’s to Ismene “I will do my part and thine if thou will not to a brother. False to him will never be found”.(Sophocles,13) Antigone is saying that she is going to Bury Polyneices even if it is illegal he is our brother so that’s what we have to doThe author should clarify who Polyneices was and why he needed a burial. The quoted passages from the play should be introduced and explained to provide context for the reader.
Ismene is saying that she doesn’t want to bury her brother because it’s illegal and doesn’t want to deal with the consequences if she were to do thatThe author should provide more context for the reader to understand why Ismene doesn't want to bury their brother.
It sounds like Antigone is being selfish and saying that she sounds she will break the law for herself and that she was burying her brother so she could be at peace. However Antigone clearly cares about her family because she was willing to break the law to honor PolyneicesThe author should provide more evidence to support the claim that Antigone cared about her family. The quoted passage from the play should be introduced and explained to provide context for the reader.
Many say that they live for their family and that they would die to protect them or do anything for them but none more than Antigone.Conclusion should be more informative. It should explain why Antigone's actions were the right thing to do.
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