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Published: Nov 5, 2020
Words: 1577|Pages: 3|8 min read
Published: Nov 5, 2020
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A.A Milne’s 1977 show Winnie The Pooh secretly deals with the topic of mental disorders, whether it be the depression of Eeyore, or schizophrenic tendencies of Christopher Robin, many of the characters in this happy, upbeat kids show have a hidden issue.The writer needs to make a correction: A.A. Milne's book Winnie The Pooh was published in 1926, not 1977. The paragraph could benefit from a thesis statement that gives a brief overview of the essay's main points.
First of all, the most obvious disorder is Eeyore having very noticeable depression, Eeyore displays is a prevailing sadness and depressed mood, low self-esteem, feelings of hopelessness, a loss of enjoyment of things that should be pleasurable, and fatigue and loss of energy every day. While all of his contrarily hyperactive and happy-go-lucky friends embark on adventures, Eeyore begrudgingly tags along with a lack of interest. Eeyore often makes self-deprecating comments about his unimportance, frequently saying 'Thanks for noticing me'. Eeyore's hopeless outlook on life is depicted when Pooh said good morning to Eeyore, and he glumly responds by saying, 'Good morning Pooh Bear. If it is a good morning, which I doubt'. Eeyore is characterized by always being sad, but why did A.A Milne’s decide this.There are several grammar errors and awkward phrasings in this paragraph. For example, "Eeyore displays is a prevailing sadness" should be "Eeyore displays a prevailing sadness." Also, "While all of his contrarily hyperactive" should be "While all of his hyperactive friends are to the contrary." The sentence "Eeyore is characterized by always being sad, but why did A.A. Milne's decide this" is incomplete and should be rephrased. A suggestion could be, "It is worth exploring why A.A. Milne chose to characterize Eeyore as always being sad."
Secondly, Piglet is also a candidate for having a mental disorder. Piglet's petite and frail frame defines him. These physical qualities most likely contribute to his anxious, fragile, and insecure nature. Piglet often cowers in fear even when moments are unthreatening. Though his best friend, Pooh, and the others don't seem to mind Piglet's constant fears and happily brings him along and protects him through every adventure, Piglet is noticeably ashamed of his cowardliness, and many storylines have revolved around him making attempts to overcome his fears. It is quite clear that Piglet's timid, jittery, and hesitant qualities are grounds to diagnose him with Generalized Anxiety Disorder (GAD), for short, anxiety. Piglet's irrational anxiety causes him to suffer from a distinct stuttering speech impediment, stress, and general nervousness. Those with GAD worry endlessly and cannot be relaxed immediately, like Piglet. Symptoms of GAD that Piglet experiences are excessive and ongoing worry and tension, an unrealistic view of problems, and being easily startled. Piglet often thinks of how any situation can go wrong and endures internal conflicts regarding what he should do in case a situation does go wrong. Piglet undoubtedly suffers from Generalized Anxiety Disorder; and his character is developed through his anxious demeanor.The paragraph could benefit from a topic sentence that introduces the idea of Piglet's anxiety disorder.
Thirdly, there’s the face of the cartoon himself, Winnie the Pooh. He is naive, innocent, cheerful, friendly, thoughtful, and sometimes insightful; he is always willing to help his friends and try his best. A prime motivation of Pooh is his love for honey, which almost always leads to trouble. Pooh's obsession with honey and his round tummy can allow us to establish that he may have an eating disorder; specifically binge-eating disorder. According to Mayo Clinic 'binge-eating disorder is a serious eating disorder in which you frequently consume unusually large amounts of food and feel unable to stop eating.' This is portrayed by Pooh who constantly and compulsively devours honey.This paragraph could benefit from a topic sentence that introduces the idea of Winnie the Pooh's eating habits.
Fourth of all, Christopher Robin is the only human character in the Winnie the Pooh franchise.The paragraph could benefit from a thesis statement that ties it to the rest of the essay's discussion of mental disorders.
Fifth of all, Tigger is Pooh's exuberant, happy, irresponsible and sometimes trouble-making tiger friend. He loves to bounce, especially bouncing on others. He is energetic, outgoing, fun loving and so overconfident that he thinks that any task is 'what tiggers do best'. Oftentimes, Tigger causes more chaos rather than good.The writer needs to be more precise in describing Tigger's behavior. The paragraph could benefit from a topic sentence that introduces the idea of Tigger's character.
Sixth of all, Rabbit is the friendly but irritable rabbit in the Winnie the Pooh series. He believes he is the smartest animal in the Hundred Acre Wood, always insists on doing things his way, and is obsessed with rules, planning and order. He often loses his temper to others and bosses them around, but deep down, he cares plenty about his friends. In the Walt Disney films, he takes immense pride in his garden and hates when someone or something messes it up. Evidently, Rabbit can be diagnosed with Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder (OCD) since he is intensely preoccupied with cleaning, planning, organizing, and maintaining order. In most episodes and movie scenes involving Rabbit, he is seen tending to his already clean home and protecting his garden from those who may damage it. If anyone or anything tries to steal his vegetables or damages his garden, Rabbit get very upset. In fact, Rabbit keeps each of his vegetables symmetrical in his garden, which is a tell-tale symptom of OCD. In addition to wanting to be organized and practical, Rabbit's tendency to take charge is inflated to the extent that he becomes a control freak who insists on doing things exactly right, in his way and in the proper order. He also has a short temper and can act mean or callous to others, although not intentionally. Symptoms of OCD that Rabbit exhibits are fear of contamination or dirt, keeping things orderly and symmetrical, and constantly washing and/or cleaning. Rabbit's OCD causes him to be very uptight and sometimes, rude to his friends. In his quest to maintain order, keep his property clean, and assure his plans are conducted, Rabbit portrays signs of that he is suffering from Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder.
The reason why A.A Milne chose this path for Winnie the Pooh is unknown, maybe he's trying to spread awareness, maybe he's dealt with this stuff himself. Although this cartoon was made in 1926, and none of these disorders were recognized maybe Milne decided to associate each character with a different issue so younger children will know this is normal and to not treat others badly.
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