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Words: 1691 |
Pages: 4|
9 min read
Published: Jan 15, 2019
Words: 1691|Pages: 4|9 min read
Published: Jan 15, 2019
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Prescription medications are slowly killing our children; they are taking medication they don’t need for a condition that can be easily treated by other meansThe writer should provide evidence to support this claim or else it comes across as an exaggeration. A more effective way to phrase this would be: "Some studies suggest that prescription drugs used to treat ADHD in children have negative side effects that may be harmful to their mental and physical health." The writer should provide specific examples of these studies.
ADHD is a unbiased condition. It affects everyone of all races, gender, and even social class.While this is true to some extent, the writer should acknowledge that there is a higher incidence of ADHD diagnosis among certain groups, such as boys and children from low-income families. Also, the writer should avoid using personal anecdotes that might undermine the credibility of the essay.
The solution that the medical field has come up with is drugs. Drugs that slowly waste away the child until they are a shell of their former selves. Drugs that are in the same category as cocaine with nasty symptoms that no adult would ever try to put up withThe writer should provide evidence to support these claims. Instead of stating that Ritalin is in the same category as cocaine, the writer should explain that both drugs are stimulants that affect the brain's chemistry in similar ways.
So how can we treat ADHD? Is there an alternative to these horrible prescription medications? Many people have taken to self medicating themselves and their children with caffeine. While Overconsumption of caffeine can cause some pretty nasty side effects aswell, if used in moderation the pros clearly outweigh the cons (Collingwood). For regular people caffeine usually gives them a pep-talk, it gets them going and keeps them awake. From my personal experience, as well as many others who are affected by this condition, we find the experience to be the exact opposite. A cup of tea or even coffee will create a calming effect, it helps to focus in on what the person is doing and relax. For example, personally, I find tea works the best, before I went to take my driver’s test I drank a cup of tea to calm me and help with focusing on the road. Caffeine is not without it’s dangers either, after all, it is still a drug. Drinking too much caffeine too often can lead to irritability, anxiety, and insomnia (Collingwood). These side effects are short lived and can be easily corrected just by not drinking it as much and are not nearly as bad as the stresses, physical and mental, that Ritalin and Adderall put on people (Collingwood). Caffeine has even been proven to work on animals with ADHD. There was a study with a group of rats that had impulsivity and poor attention issues, they gave them a dose of caffeine about 30 minutes before a training activity to see if it would improve their performance. It was found that they were more successful in the tasks they were given after the dose of caffeine than they were before being given the caffeine (Collingwood). It was also shown that with a group of rats that did not have an attention issue there was little to no difference with their performance when given caffeine versus without it (Collingwood). This shows that even in animals caffeine can work against attention issues. Caffeine can be a great alternative to harsh medications prescribed by doctors, it just must be used in moderation to avoid negative symptomsThe writer suggests that caffeine may be a better alternative to prescription drugs for treating ADHD. While there is some evidence to support this claim, the writer should acknowledge that caffeine has its own negative side effects and may not be suitable for all children. The writer should also provide evidence to support the effectiveness of caffeine as a treatment for ADHD.
There are other means of naturally subduing ADHD symptoms but in my personal experience and many others’ caffeine seems to be the most effective. ADHD is not something that should be taken lightly and neither should the medications for it either. Sometimes it is difficult to get through school or have a social life with this condition, it can isolate you from your community, and affect your education. Some people still believe that ADHD is not a real condition, something made up by doctors so they can medicate our kids, this is not the truth. It has been proven that people who have ADHD don’t have the same amount of dopamine as regular people. Even brain scans show the activity in their brain to be different. Nothing is worse than the side effects the prescription medications create thoughThis is an oversimplification of a complex issue. The writer should acknowledge that there is no one-size-fits-all solution to treating ADHD and that different treatments may be more effective for different children.
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