By clicking “Check Writers’ Offers”, you agree to our terms of service and privacy policy. We’ll occasionally send you promo and account related email
No need to pay just yet!
About this sample
About this sample
Words: 1118 |
Pages: 2|
6 min read
Published: Sep 1, 2020
Words: 1118|Pages: 2|6 min read
Published: Sep 1, 2020
See expert comments
Imagine a time a person, that could be a loved one such as your dad or brother was getting arrested by the police and while the police was arresting your dad, they asked him to get out his I.D. and as soon as he was getting out his I.D. the police start shooting him just because they supposedlyThe sentence should be changed to "the police started shooting him just because they supposedly 'thought that he was bringing out his gun'". This is because the entire paragraph is written in the past tense, and this sentence should match the rest of the paragraph.
The first item, I used for the project is a cartoon and in that cartoon the teacher ask the students what do you want to be when you grow and a black student says that they want to be alive. The reason why I chose this cartoon to promote Black Lives Matter was because in the cartoon the black boy says that he wants to be alive when he grows up because he scared that a racist police officer would shoot him cruelly just because the color of his skin. That is a good example because a lot of black people have been killed by the police even though they were unarmed. For example on, CNN it showed how one boy around my age was killed by the police because all he did was run away. The way how the police killed the unarmed black kid is by using one of the tasser guns to shock the boy so that he could be unconsciousThe sentence could be rephrased as "The police killed the unarmed black kid by using a taser gun to render him unconscious".
Another item I used to promote the cause for Black Lives Matter is a picture and in the picture it shows a black girl carrying a sign that says pro black isn’t anti-white. The reason why I chose this picture is because some people think that if someone says Black Lives Matter then that means only the life of the black people matter and that’s why they came up with all lives mattered, but that’s not the true meaning of Black Lives Matter. The true meaning of Black Lives Matter is to say yes all lives matter but in the criminal justice system black lives haven’t really matteredThe sentence is not clear. It could be rephrased as "The true meaning of Black Lives Matter is to acknowledge that all lives matter, but in the criminal justice system, black lives have historically not been valued or protected."
This next item I used to promote the cause for Black Lives Matter is a Quote/ Picture and in the picture it compares the way how police treated two white guys to two black guysThe author uses the phrase "two white guys" twice, which is not a clear or appropriate way to refer to individuals. Instead, the author could use their names or other descriptors, such as "two white perpetrators" or "two white shooters."
In conclusion, I think that more people should join the Black Lives Matter movement to stop this massacre of police killing unarmed men because the more people that join, the more likely the police killings will stop. I also think that more celebrities like Colin Kaepernick should also take a stand because they have an enormous amount of people supporting them such as their fans. I also think that more black people should work hard in school so that they could take the judge positions at the court instead of some old white man who doesn’t really care about black people and who would let the police get away with killing black person unjustly. If we have all of that then there would be no more police killing black people just because the color of their skin. Also there would be less police killings in general because of police fearing of possibly losing their job or getting arrested, etc.
Browse our vast selection of original essay samples, each expertly formatted and styled
See expert comments